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So it seems-
that I remain to be blind;
oblivious with the whisperings-
stranger’s sounds with wishes to fill
the open spaces where
freedom reigns.
My heart, indeed
remains to be longing- not
for a chain or a golden cage, but
for spaces that wisdom fills-
lost paradise,
most desired place.
That my soul- may
live, and not wilt from the
glaring lights of a rhinestone’s world-
where sweet words are some mocking
snares, and scrutiny is-
a hidden praise.
Copyright: Leofina Jane G. Galleta
©2009leofinajanegalleta. All Rights Reserved
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[...] Original post by drippingmind [...]
nice poetry.. i like the haiku style poetry u hav written shoet and meaningful verses!! thnx for visiting!!
hello parv,
many thanks for such gracious comment,
Ugh, I liked! So clear and positively.
Thank you
Saurooon
Thanks Sauroon, glad you liked it,
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